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The Fire Didn’t Burn You Down [a poem]

The fire did not burn you down.
Though it arrived without warning—
swift, unrelenting,
devouring the edges of what once seemed enduring—
still, you remained.

Not untouched.
Not inviolate.
But whole, in a way the flames could never unmake.
You did not vanish beneath the ruin.
You were refined within it.

What was lost
were the husks of former things—
the frames too narrow to hold your becoming,
the weight you bore
long after it ceased to serve you.
The fire, indifferent though it was,
took only what was already asking to be released.

You did not rise in radiance.
You rose in silence—
through ash, through stillness,
through the fragile cadence of breath
drawn gently
into lungs that remembered how to receive.

There was no witness
to the moment you chose to stay,
when departure might have felt kinder,
quieter,
easier to explain.
But you stayed.
And in that quiet act of remaining,
you spoke something holy into the world.

Now—
even with the scent of smoke
woven into your memory,
even with the echo of heat
resting beneath your skin—
you are here.

And you are not what burned.
You are what endured.
What withstood.
What listened for the still, small voice beneath the ruin—
and rose to answer with a life.

5 replies »

  1. Read it and reread it twice thrice to grasp it completely.
    Beautiful words, especially “fragile cadence of breath”.
    Beautiful imagery and the beneath the words the strong essence……so effortlessly conveyed.

    Too good.

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