A code called.
She races
asย the seas part
for her crossing.
Reposedย before her–
rhythm without pulse,
fluid without flow,
substance without life–
is you.
Invaded
as lines in your thigh
penetrateย aย pump paralyzed,
as tube betweenย ashen lips
thrusts into stagnant air.
Poisonย pushed into aย heart
quivering, she watches as
your chest rises
with theย force
of each counterfeit breath.
The symphony begins.
Thump
Shock delivered.
Strike throughย the breast.
Voltage down your limbs.
Buoyant, jerking,
Eachย retort
a life feigned by lightening.
Crunch
Bonesย crush.
Theย carol of ribs,
a surrender to the fury
of each compression,
quickens with herย pounding heart.
Eachย chord
a dissonant harmony.
Glazed are your eyes
as they pulsate
with the cadence of their dance.
She looks at you.
Pleads for you to return.
Prays to the god she plays.
But your eyes plead for something more.
You leave her.
The story ends.
And the orchestra leaves.
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โ The Cardiac Arrest From a Patient’s Perspectiveย โ
Categories: All Poetry, Death & Loss, Medical Poetry, Medicine, Poetry by Phoebe





Reblogged this on Watch and Whirl and commented:
She has a way with words like I’ve seldom read, definitely a talent. It’s so easy to keep reading I hope you enjoy her words as much as I do.
Wow! I’m awed by your craftsmanship with word and feeling and perspective. Just wow.
Thank you for your kind words! ๐
Reblogged this on The Dahlborg Healthcare Leadership Blog.
gripping. well done.
Thank you ๐